doc PG 17 relnotes: wording adjustments
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authorBruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
Thu, 16 May 2024 02:54:29 +0000 (15 22:54 -0400)
committerBruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
Thu, 16 May 2024 02:54:29 +0000 (15 22:54 -0400)
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parenta8010d03e1f30c657b6c868fa857c7b8b53c3fbc
doc PG 17 relnotes:  wording adjustments

Reported-by: jian he
Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/CACJufxHTJBqDmBC4iPgte_xd4aMgONRm680Ji5m5gCA8+YEmJg@mail.gmail.com

Co-authored-by: jian he
Backpatch-through: master
doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml