From d6b43d908da6cb723044dc64a4d64927a958bd92 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Graham Percival <graham@percival-music.ca>
Date: Sat, 1 Jan 2011 00:31:56 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] CG: minor clarifications to quick start.

---
 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi | 26 ++++++++++++++++++++------
 Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi | 23 ++++++++++++++++-------
 2 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi b/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
index 4d014836a4..a8e4e0d6be 100644
--- a/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
@@ -29,7 +29,8 @@ helpful users who may have never created a patch before.}
 @node Lilydev
 @section Lilydev
 
-text.
+This section discusses how to install and use the Ubuntu LilyPond
+Development Remix.
 
 @menu
 * Installing lilydev::
@@ -63,7 +64,9 @@ Download the Ubuntu LilyPond Developer Remix disk image:
 
 @advanced{Some users might want these files, but if you don't
 recognize what they are, then you don't want them:
+@*
 @uref{http://files.lilynet.net/ubuntu-lilydev-remix-1.0.iso.md5}
+@*
 @uref{http://files.lilynet.net/ubuntu-lilydev-remix-1.0.iso.torrent}
 }
 
@@ -467,11 +470,22 @@ Lilydev users may now skip to the chapter which is aimed at
 their intended contributions:
 
 @itemize
-@item @rcontrib{Documentation work}
-@item @rcontrib{Translating the documentation}
-@item @rcontrib{Website work}
-@item @rcontrib{Regression tests}
-@item @rcontrib{Programming work}
+@item @ref{Documentation work}
+@item @ref{Translating the documentation}
+@item @ref{Website work}
+@item @ref{Regression tests}
+@item @ref{Programming work}
+@end itemize
+
+These chapters are mainly intended for people not using LilyDev,
+but they contain extra information about the
+@qq{behind-the-scenes} activities.  We recommend that you read
+these at your leisure, a few weeks after beginning work with
+LilyDev.
+
+@itemize
+@item @ref{Working with source code}
+@item @ref{Compiling}
 @end itemize
 
 
diff --git a/Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi b/Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi
index 4c45e9c8ee..13e3b18be8 100644
--- a/Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi
@@ -914,12 +914,11 @@ code review website:
 @uref{http://codereview.appspot.com/}
 @end example
 
-@subsubheading Initial setup
+@subsubheading @command{git-cl} install
 
-@enumerate
+LilyDev users should skip over these @q{install} instructions.
 
-@item
-You must have a gmail account.
+@enumerate
 
 @item
 Install @command{git-cl} by entering:
@@ -934,11 +933,21 @@ symbolic link to the @command{git-cl} and @command{upload.py}
 scripts in one of your PATH directories (such as
 @file{$HOME/bin}).
 
+@end enumerate
+
+@subsubheading @command{git-cl} configuration
+
+LilyDev users should perform these @q{configuration} instructions.
+
+@enumerate
+@item
+You must have a gmail account; please create one if you do not
+have one already.
 
 @item
-Move into the top source directory and then configure
-@command{git cl}.  If you do not understand any question, just
-answer with a newline (CR).
+Move into the top source directory and then configure @command{git
+cl} with the following commands.  If you do not understand any
+question, just answer with a newline (CR).
 
 @example
 cd $HOME/lilypond-git/
-- 
2.11.4.GIT