From 7c17d36167aae3dd7045d5f72136d030a306b188 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: legatvs <legatvs.git@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Nov 2010 10:42:29 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] tidy NEWS, README

---
 NEWS   |  4 ++--
 README | 15 +++++++++------
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS
index 3c62110..26c4cc8 100644
--- a/NEWS
+++ b/NEWS
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 
-2.3.0  "Glorified Wrapper Script"
+2.3.0  "Glorified Wrapper Script" (gws)
 
 * Single-script vs. multiple-clive-modules
     - clive is no longer dispersed all over the file system in Perl packages
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
     - e.g. curl, wget or whatever
 
 * Complete command line interface clean up
-    - Esoteric or otherwise now completely obsolete features were discarded
+    - Esoteric, or otherwise now completely obsoleted, features were discarded
     - Run clive with --help to see what's left, or see "REMOVED" below
 
 NOTES
diff --git a/README b/README
index 7076331..cdc8899 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ GIT: <git://repo.or.cz/clive.git>
 
 PREREQUISITES
 
-See the Makefile.PL file for Perl module prerequisites.
+See the Makefile.PL file for Perl module prerequisites, under "PREREQ_PM".
 
 You will also need:
     * quvi(1) 0.2.4+ [1]
-    * A download command, e.g. wget(1) [2], curl(1) [3] -- or something similar
+    * A download command, e.g. wget(1) [2], curl(1) [3] -- or similar
 
 [1] <http://quvi.googlecode.com/>
 [2] <http://www.gnu.org/software/wget/>
@@ -23,15 +23,14 @@ You will also need:
 
 INSTALLATION
 
-You can skip this step, if you like, and instead just run "bin/clive".
+You could skip this step, if you like, and instead just run "bin/clive".
 This should work as long as the prerequisites are found.
 
-To install:
     perl Makefile.PL
     make
     make install
 
-    * You can specify install prefix with INSTALL_BASE
+    * You can specify the install prefix with INSTALL_BASE
         e.g. perl Makefile.PL INSTALL_BASE=/usr/local
 
   More: <http://search.cpan.org/perldoc?ExtUtils::MakeMaker>
@@ -41,4 +40,8 @@ To install:
 GETTING STARTED
 
     * Configure ~/.cliverc, see "man clive" and "FILES" section for an example
-        - Set at least --quvi and --get-with
+        - Set at least --quvi and --get-with, e.g.:
+
+            % cat > ~/.cliverc
+            --quvi "/usr/bin/quvi %u"
+            --get-with "/usr/bin/curl -L -C - -o %f %u"
-- 
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