From 92a595e9e7a4ff264f6f4025ab4baf0d8700716a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Wuzzy Date: Tue, 23 Jan 2018 02:51:58 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Copy-editing of chorus plant help --- mods/ITEMS/mcl_end/chorus_plant.lua | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/mods/ITEMS/mcl_end/chorus_plant.lua b/mods/ITEMS/mcl_end/chorus_plant.lua index 8683ab9d..4308f382 100644 --- a/mods/ITEMS/mcl_end/chorus_plant.lua +++ b/mods/ITEMS/mcl_end/chorus_plant.lua @@ -19,8 +19,8 @@ local chorus_flower_box = { minetest.register_node("mcl_end:chorus_flower", { description = "Chorus Flower", - _doc_items_longdesc = "A chorus flower is the living part of a chorus plant. When placed on end stone, it will grow into a tall chorus plant. It may grow upwards or branch off into more flowers to the sides. When it grows, it may die on old age eventually. It also dies when it is unable to grow.", - _doc_items_usagehelp = "It can only be placed on top of end stone, on top of a chorus plant stem, or at the side of exactly a chorus plant stem. Just place it and watch it grow.", + _doc_items_longdesc = "A chorus flower is the living part of a chorus plant. It can grow into a tall chorus plant, step by step. When it grows, it may die on old age eventually. It also dies when it is unable to grow.", + _doc_items_usagehelp = "Place it and wait for it to grow. It can only be placed on top of end stone, on top of a chorus plant stem, or at the side of exactly a chorus plant stem.", tiles = { "mcl_end_chorus_flower.png", "mcl_end_chorus_flower.png", @@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ minetest.register_node("mcl_end:chorus_flower", { minetest.register_node("mcl_end:chorus_flower_dead", { description = "Dead Chorus Flower", - _doc_items_longdesc = "This is a part of a chorus plant. Chorus flowers die of old age or when they are unable to grow. A dead chorus flower can be harvested to obtain a fresh chorus flower which can be planted.", + _doc_items_longdesc = "This is a part of a chorus plant. It doesn't grow. Chorus flowers die of old age or when they are unable to grow. A dead chorus flower can be harvested to obtain a fresh chorus flower which is able to grow again.", tiles = { "mcl_end_chorus_flower_dead.png", "mcl_end_chorus_flower_dead.png", @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ minetest.register_node("mcl_end:chorus_flower_dead", { minetest.register_node("mcl_end:chorus_plant", { description = "Chorus Plant Stem", - _doc_items_longdesc = "A chorus plant stem is a part of a chorus plant holds the plant and its flowers together. It needs end stone as its soil. Stems are grown from chorus flowers.", + _doc_items_longdesc = "A chorus plant stem is the part of a chorus plant which holds the whole plant together. It needs end stone as its soil. Stems are grown from chorus flowers.", tiles = { "mcl_end_chorus_plant.png", "mcl_end_chorus_plant.png", -- 2.11.4.GIT