From 932a6775aa0cc64e2caf3032c9ac2500ccedb7c6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Daniel Moerner Date: Sun, 22 Feb 2009 16:50:35 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Edited second and third haikus --- poem-6 | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/poem-6 b/poem-6 index 8f1ebf8..3d68414 100644 --- a/poem-6 +++ b/poem-6 @@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ Winter's bite am I, White, brittle as baby's skin. Growing into spring. -Dark clouds over the land, -A grey beauty nigh unmatched +Grey beauty unmatched, +Dark clouds linger over land, For I fear the sun. Snow dusts the mountain, -a gift of mine which only -summer will return. \ No newline at end of file +My white tears sitting lightly, +Summer returns them. \ No newline at end of file -- 2.11.4.GIT